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  • Hey Landon,

    Really love the top frames. Characters and scenes are tilted and off-balance, creating a lovely clockwise motion which pulls the viewer in. The box-bubbles are usually reserved for narration, which is working great at the top but not so well lower down when characters are speaking.

    The lower section is too crowded for your talented art work(and I mean that sincerely); I can follow the action ok but I don't appreciate it like I could if it was enlarged to a few more pages.  Stretch this action scene out, its great looking so far.

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