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Here is the next page. Im still new at this so any advice would help. Im doing it 'manga' style so any1 savvy on it pls lemme kno. All other constructive critiques welcome.

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  • thnx! Will do

  • Central figure and action lines look great!  My eye goes next to the two 'soldiers' at right...they could be enlarged a bit.  Then I gradually figure out that a third soldier has just been splattered, ah! Experiment with enlarging the third soldier and bringing him closer; it would connect him more clearly to the blow and up the intensity of the blow.  Nice pic, Richard! 

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